Bonsoir pouvez vous me corriger mon texte en anglais s'il vous plait ? Merci From April 9th to April 13th, 2018, I did an training period with medical group l
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Bonsoir pouvez vous me corriger mon texte en anglais s'il vous plait ? Merci
From April 9th to April 13th, 2018, I did an training period with medical group located in Nante During this training period, I was interested in the world of work.
I did it in a health center because health has interested me for a long time.
As far as i am concerned I was hoping to discover many professions related to health, which I did not necessarily know.
This medical group was founded in 1987. This structure responds to the needs of the local population who can consult a general practitioner, osteopath, dentist, chiropodist, physiotherapist, midwife and nurse on site or at home on appointment ; from 8h30 to 19h and often more.
As there are many jobs within this center, I enjoyed to able to observe more than one profession.
This is how I realized that it can be very interesting to study the relationships between the different members of this medical o
From April 9th to April 13th, 2018, I did an training period with medical group located in Nante During this training period, I was interested in the world of work.
I did it in a health center because health has interested me for a long time.
As far as i am concerned I was hoping to discover many professions related to health, which I did not necessarily know.
This medical group was founded in 1987. This structure responds to the needs of the local population who can consult a general practitioner, osteopath, dentist, chiropodist, physiotherapist, midwife and nurse on site or at home on appointment ; from 8h30 to 19h and often more.
As there are many jobs within this center, I enjoyed to able to observe more than one profession.
This is how I realized that it can be very interesting to study the relationships between the different members of this medical o
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1. Réponse KiwiNutBlast
Bonjour, donc voici le texte corrigé:
"From April 9th to April 13th, 2018, I did a training period with a medical group located in Nante. During this training period, I was interested in the world of work.
I did it in a health center because this field has captivated me for a long time.
As far as i am concerned, I was hoping to discover many health-related professions which I did not previously know about.
This medical group was founded in 1987. Its structure responds to the needs of the local population who can consult a general practitioner, osteopath, dentist, chiropodist, physiotherapist, midwife and nurse on site or at home on appointment ; from 8h30 to 19h and often more.
As there are numerous jobs within this center, I enjoyed to be able to observe many of them. "
En ce qui concerne le dernier paragraphe, il est pas complet donc j'ai pas pu corriger. (mais ce qui est ecrit déja dans la partie du dernier paragraphe est correcte).
Bonne continuation :)), si ma réponse vous a satisfait svp nottez moi comme meilleur réponse! :)