Es-ce qu’il y aurais des fautes ?

We took the plane

Valentine and I were very happy

But before we had to go to the hotel

like octopus, it wasn't very good

we met two of my mother's friends/we met two friends of my mother

They live four hours from Beijin, so the journey was long

but we had a lot of fun with Valentine

even if sometimes

we took the plane

after we arrived, we visited the yonghe temple, we could meet a tibetan monk.

..like octopus. It wasn't but ...

they lived for 4 hours from...

my mother warned us that ...

even if sometimes we had troubles understanding each others.