bonsoir vous pouvez me corrigée ce travail s'ils vous plait merci

I'm a student in a first year of a BTS in accounting In the town trall at à physiotherapy office. I'm determinate and I have a strong personality. French... A little bit of spanish and english I did horse riding for 2 years I went to spain, republic of ??? And algeria and I'd like tout work in Dubaï or on new zealand