Bonjour, Comment raconter ses vacances en anglais ? En 10lignes

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My holidays was very cool! I went to the cinema with my friends and meet new people! Sometimes I went to the cinema to watch films while i ate pop-corn but my favorite part was when i went tho the beach with my family,when the water was warm and the sun hot! These holidays were my favorite,i did a lot of things like discover country,town and many things!