Bonsoir je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur le planning de mes futurs vacances au présent continuous est ce que quelqun pourrais me corriger ? Merci This sum
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Bonsoir je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur le planning de mes futurs vacances au présent continuous est ce que quelqun pourrais me corriger ? Merci
This summer, i’ m going to sicily for three weeks with my parents and my sisters. To get there i will take the boat to genoa in italy to cross it will last twenty-one Hours. On the boat there will be a swimming pool, a bar, à discothèque. Then i will Go to a small house along to sea. For three weeks i will go around sicily and Go a little to each place. I will Go to the sea a lot. I will sunbathe along the beach, drink cocktails. Its holidays are going to be superb. Then to finish i will take the boat during is twenty-one Hours. Once back from sicily i will Go see my boyfriend. I’ll Go to the movies with him, i’ll Go shopping , we ‘ll Go to the macdo,.. my best friend will sleep at my house and the next day we will Go to walibi. I’ll Go sleep a week At my grandmother with all my cousins. And end of august i prépare all my things for the return of next years.
This summer, i’ m going to sicily for three weeks with my parents and my sisters. To get there i will take the boat to genoa in italy to cross it will last twenty-one Hours. On the boat there will be a swimming pool, a bar, à discothèque. Then i will Go to a small house along to sea. For three weeks i will go around sicily and Go a little to each place. I will Go to the sea a lot. I will sunbathe along the beach, drink cocktails. Its holidays are going to be superb. Then to finish i will take the boat during is twenty-one Hours. Once back from sicily i will Go see my boyfriend. I’ll Go to the movies with him, i’ll Go shopping , we ‘ll Go to the macdo,.. my best friend will sleep at my house and the next day we will Go to walibi. I’ll Go sleep a week At my grandmother with all my cousins. And end of august i prépare all my things for the return of next years.
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1. Réponse charlottegreselin
Parents and sisters -> my family
These holidays*
Au lieu de superb tu peux mettre “amazing” c’est mieux ;)
Pas de “is” après during ;)
We’ll go see movies to the cinema*
At my grandmother’s*
And at the end of August I’ll prepare everything for the start of the new year school*
Au lieu de will à chaque fois tu peux le contracter et mettre ‘ll ça marche aussi
Et jamais d’accents sur les “a”. Mets Des majuscules sur les noms propres ;)