Bonjour est ce que vous pouvez corriger mon texte svp ? Mercii d'avance I'm Laura.... I am 17 year old. I don't play sports but sometimes I walk close by my hou
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Bonjour est ce que vous pouvez corriger mon texte svp ? Mercii d'avance
I'm Laura.... I am 17 year old. I don't play sports but sometimes I walk close by my house ( parfois je marche près de chez moi). I enjoy listen to music, I play piano since the age of nine. I like spend time with my friends and ma family. I love to travel, seeing newss places and meeting people from around the world. I've got a brother and sister. This summer, on July I went in Mexique ( cancun) for 2 weeks. In august I'm babysitting.
merciii <3
I'm Laura.... I am 17 year old. I don't play sports but sometimes I walk close by my house ( parfois je marche près de chez moi). I enjoy listen to music, I play piano since the age of nine. I like spend time with my friends and ma family. I love to travel, seeing newss places and meeting people from around the world. I've got a brother and sister. This summer, on July I went in Mexique ( cancun) for 2 weeks. In august I'm babysitting.
merciii <3
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My name is Laura. I am seventen years old. I've got a brother and a sister.
I don't exercise but I often go for a walk (wander around/ walk around == se promener) next to my house. I enjoy listening to music. I have been playing the piano since I was nine.I like (spending time--> correct ou -->)hanging out (= passer du temps aussi) with my friends and family. I love travelling, discovering new places and meeting people all around the world. Last summer, in July, I went to Mexico to Cancún for two weeks. In August I babysat to get some pocket money (pour avoir de l'argent de poche)
en espérant que cela te convienne
bonne soirée :)