Bonjour , pouvez vous me corriger l'introduction en anglais svp c'est pour lundi . Merci d'avance pour ce qui auront prêté attention. I'm going to talk about th
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I'm going to talk about the notion Seats and forms of power . First let me try and give a simple definition of this notion . Power is the ability to exert an influence over others or to change the course of events . Power can take different forms : Poitical , economic , military or religious.
I would like to illustrate this notion through the topic of consumption.
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1. Réponse Hugo806
Salut !
Tout est bon, j’aurais juste enlevé le « try and » dans la deuxième phrase, car ça donne «d’abord laissez moi essayer et donner une définition simple de cette notion ». Du coup tu peux enlever le « essayer » et avoir « First let me give you a simple definition of this notion », ou le laisser mais changer le and: « First let me try to give you a simple definition of this notion »=> « I'm going to talk about the notion Seats and forms of power . First let me give you a simple definition of this notion . Power is the ability to exert an influence over others or to change the course of events . Power can take different forms : Poitical , economic , military or religious.
I would like to illustrate this notion through the topic of consumption. »
Bonne journée !